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This blog has been prepared as a part of the thinking activity assigned by Megha Trivedi Ma’am. The present work attempts a detailed critical analysis of the satire on materialism represented in Gabriel Okara’s poem “You Laughed and Laughed and Laughed.” The discussion is based on textual interpretation and scholarly references to ensure authenticity and academic clarity.
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Introduction:
You Laughed and Laughed and Laughed is a powerful free-verse poem written by the Nigerian poet Gabriel Okara, first published in A New Book of African Verse (1985). It is one of Okara’s most widely anthologized works. The poem presents an African speaker who confronts the ridicule and mockery of a white colonial listener, exposing the misunderstandings and cultural arrogance arising from colonial domination.
The poem is structured around the repeated refrain “you laughed and laughed and laughed,” which represents persistent ridicule and mockery directed at the speaker’s music, movement, dance, and very identity. This sustained repetition not only shows the emotional cruelty of the mocker but also serves as a satirical critique of the materialistic and superficial values of the colonial world. The poem eventually transforms the nature of laughter from a cold, dismissive tool into a symbol of authentic humanity and connection to nature.
In this essay, we will examine how satire on materialism is represented in the poem — what the poet is satirizing, how he satirizes it, and why this matters in terms of theme and cultural critique.
About the Poet — Gabriel Okara
Gabriel Okara (b. 1921) is a Nigerian poet, novelist, and one of the earliest influential voices of modern Anglophone African literature. He is often credited as the first modern Nigerian poet in English. His work explores themes of cultural identity, colonial impact, and the conflict between traditional African values and Western modernity.
Okara’s style blends African oral tradition with modern literary techniques, and he often employs imagery and metaphors that juxtapose native rhythms of life with the alienating forces of Western colonization. In You Laughed and Laughed and Laughed, this juxtaposition becomes the foundation for a broader satire on a worldview dominated by materialistic values that fail to understand deeper cultural and human essence.
What is Satire on Materialism?
Satire is a literary device that uses humor, irony, exaggeration, or ridicule to expose and criticize human vice or folly. In You Laughed and Laughed and Laughed, Gabriel Okara uses satire to expose and undermine the materialistic worldview — a worldview that values machines, technological progress, and surface appearances over human depth, spiritual connection, and cultural meaning.
Materialism here represents the fixation on material objects (cars, technology, wealth, comfort) as ultimate markers of progress and superiority — a worldview that dismisses anything that doesn’t fit its standard as primitive or ridiculous.
Okara satirizes this attitude by showing how absurd it is when such a worldview tries but fails to understand deeper cultural expressions, revealing not only ignorance but emotional poverty.
Detailed Exploration of the Satire on Materialism in the Poem:
🔹 1. Repetition as Satirical Device
The triple repetition — “you laughed and laughed and laughed” — appears throughout the poem.
Instead of simply stating that the “you” laughed, the triple repetition amplifies the mocking voice to almost grotesque extremes. It satirizes how relentless and empty this laughter is — laughter that does not engage, understand, or reflect empathy, but instead serves to dismiss anything unfamiliar or non-material as a joke.
The repetition shows the speaker’s frustration, yes, but it also functions as a weapon of irony: by repeating the laugh so persistently, Okara exposes how shallow and meaningless the colonizer’s perspective has become. They have nothing thoughtful to offer, only derision — and thus change the tone of laughter from spontaneous humor to something hollow.
🔹 2. Mockery of Natural and Cultural Expressions
In the opening stanza, the speaker says:
“In your ears my song is motor car misfiring stopping with a choking cough,”and you laughed and laughed and laughed.
Here, the colonizer compares the African song to a faulty motor car — a piece of modern technology — and laughs. The poem satirizes this comparison: while the colonizer’s world sees machines as the ultimate standard, the speaker’s song carries deep emotion and cultural meaning.
By calling the song a “motor car misfiring,” the laugher collapses a rich cultural artifact into something mechanical and unwanted. This highlights how materialism absurdly misinterprets human expression — replacing meaning with malfunction, and the overwhelming laughter shows how absurd and insensitive this perspective is.
This is a direct satire on materialism: if the only value system is machine logic and technological progress, then anything outside it becomes laughable — even if it contains profound meaning.
🔹 3. “Car” and Material Symbols as Emblems of Superficiality
Okara uses the symbol of the car several times in the poem, not just once.
For the colonizer, the car represents progress, mobility, modernity — the powers of technology that separate humans from the earth. By repeatedly returning to the car symbol, Okara satirizes how the material world becomes an idol that blinds people to the deeper values of life and culture.
The colonizer enters their car, laughs, and remains disconnected from the speaker’s expressions. The car becomes a metaphor for emotional and spiritual detachment — a vehicle that takes you away from connection with the earth, rhythm, culture, and human depth.
This is an ironic twist: while the colonizer sees the car as a symbol of progress, the poem exposes it as an instrument that isolates them from humanity and true understanding.
🔹4. Contrast Between “Ice-Block Laughter” and Natural Warmth:
One of the most striking satirical elements is the contrast between the colonizer’s “ice-block laughter” and the speaker’s eventual laughter that is connected to nature.
Okara writes:
“But your laughter was ice-block laughter and it froze your inside, froze your voice, froze your ears…”…“My laughter is the fire of the earth, the fire of the seas and rivers…”
This contrast turns the satire from simple mockery to a deep critique of worldviews:
The colonizer’s laughter is not only harming others — it is harming themselves by freezing their emotional core. This satirizes the idea that wealth, comfort, and material security guarantee emotional health. The poem reveals this as an illusion — cold, detached, and spiritually dead.
The speaker’s laughter, rooted in nature’s elements (fire, earth, water), becomes life-affirming. The implied satire is this: those who tie meaning to materialism ultimately freeze their capacities for warmth, empathy, and understanding. Their “progress” becomes stagnation.
🔹 5. Satirizing “Omnivorous Understanding”
In another stanza, the poem sarcastically refers to the colonizer’s so-called “omnivorous understanding” — meaning they believe they understand everything:
“…passing your ‘omnivorous understanding’ and you laughed…”
This phrase ridicules the colonizer’s assumed superiority — that they understand everything because of their technology and “progress.” The satire is clear: claiming universal understanding while failing to understand even the simplest human expressions is both ironic and absurd.
Okara uses this to expose the arrogance of materialistic self-belief — that technological dominance equals moral, aesthetic, or spiritual superiority — which, in reality, reduces understanding to mockery.
🔹 6. The Earth-Bound Identity vs Mechanical World
In the final lines of the poem, the speaker explains the source of his strength:
“Because my fathers and I are owned by the living warmth of the earth through our naked feet.”
This is one of the most significant satirical turns in the poem: the material world may value machines and technology, but the speaker’s identity is rooted in the living earth itself — warmth, nature, rhythm, community.
The poem satirizes materialism by showing that the true source of strength, identity, and emotional depth lies not in machines or material possessions, but in being grounded in one’s culture, environment, and community.
While the colonizer remains stuck in mechanical comparison and spreads laughter that “freezes,” the speaker’s connection to the earth brings warmth, deep insight, and even transformative power.
What the Satire Ultimately Exposes:
Gabriel Okara’s satire on materialism does more than ridicule technological superiority. It exposes deeper cultural critiques:
➤ 1. Material Wealth ≠ Human Depth
The poem satirizes how material possessions and technological achievements are mistaken for human superiority. Laughter from this position is essentially hollow.
➤ 2. Alienation Through Materialism
Machines and material comforts, while useful, can also isolate individuals from emotional connection, community, and nature.
➤ 3. Cultural Misunderstanding as Product of Materialism
The colonizer’s ridicule arises from inability to understand — not because of actual inferiority, but because they view everything through a materialistic lens. This blinds them to deeper human experience.
➤ 4. Genuine Strength Comes From Within and Nature
The poem suggests that emotional resilience and cultural authenticity are rooted not in material progress, but in harmony with nature and heritage.
Technicalities of the Poem:
🔹 1. Form
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The poem is written in free verse (no fixed rhyme scheme, no regular meter).
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The structure is dialogic — it feels like a conversation between the speaker and the listener (“you”).
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It progresses from mockery → reflection → moral reversal.
🔹 2. Structure
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Built around repeated contrasts between two kinds of laughter:
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The colonizer’s laughter (cold, mechanical)
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The speaker’s laughter (warm, natural)
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Movement of thought:
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Ridicule of the speaker
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Description of misunderstanding
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Exposure of emotional emptiness
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Assertion of cultural strength
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🔹 3. Tone
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Begins with ironic and restrained hurt
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Moves into critical and satirical
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Ends with confident and assertive dignity
🔹 4. Theme Framework
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Cultural misunderstanding
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Satire on materialism
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Colonial arrogance
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Identity rooted in nature
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Emotional authenticity vs mechanical existence
Major Poetic Devices:
🔸 1. Repetition
Example: “you laughed and laughed and laughed”
This repetition is also a structural refrain that holds the poem together.
🔸 2. Satire
The poem ridicules:
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Technological superiority
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Materialistic worldview
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Cultural arrogance
Satire is achieved through contrast and irony rather than direct attack.
🔸 3. Irony
The people who claim superiority:
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cannot understand simple human expression
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become emotionally “frozen”
Thus, the supposedly “advanced” group is shown as spiritually limited.
🔸 4. Symbolism
🔸 5. Contrast (Antithesis)
A central device in the poem.
This contrast produces the poem’s satirical power.
🔸 6. Imagery
The poem uses strong sensory images:
Imagery helps readers feel the emotional difference between the two worlds.
🔸 7. Metaphor
Important metaphors include:
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Song = motor car misfiring
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Laughter = ice block
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Laughter = fire of nature
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Human identity = rooted in earth
These metaphors turn abstract cultural conflict into concrete experience.
🔸 8. Personification
Nature is treated as living and powerful:
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Earth gives warmth
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Seas and rivers participate in life
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Natural elements become emotional forces
This strengthens the anti-materialistic message.
🔸 9. Direct Address (Apostrophe-like Mode)
The poem repeatedly addresses “you”.
🔸 10. Juxtaposition
Two worldviews are placed side by side without explanation:
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Mechanical vs natural
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Superiority vs humility
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Laughter vs silence
Meaning emerges from their comparison.
🔸 11. Enjambment
Lines flow into the next without punctuation.
🔸 12. Alliteration
Repetition of consonant sounds enhances musicality despite free verse.
🔸 13. Minimal Punctuation
🔸 14. Dramatic Voice
The poem functions like a monologue of resistance:
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A speaker responding to mockery
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A shift from silence to self-assertion
Language Style
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Simple vocabulary but deep meaning
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Influenced by African oral tradition
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Conversational yet symbolic
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Emphasis on sound and rhythm over rhyme
Overall Technical Significance
The poem’s technical design supports its theme:
Thus, technique and meaning work together.
Conclusion:
You Laughed and Laughed and Laughed is fundamentally more than a poem about laughter. It is a subtle and powerful satire on materialism — satirizing a cultural worldview that prioritizes machines, possessions, and so-called “progress” over human connection, natural rhythm, and cultural meaning.
Through repetition, symbolism, contrast, and imagery, Gabriel Okara exposes how this materialistic viewpoint becomes shallow, emotionally cold, and spiritually isolating. By the poem’s end, the speaker’s laughter — warm, elemental, and rooted in the earth — emerges as a transformative force.
The satire teaches an important lesson: true humanity is not found in material superiority, but in authenticity, connection, and deep understanding of life beyond material surfaces.
Okara, Gabriel. You Laughed and Laughed and Laughed. In The Fisherman's Invocation, Heinemann, 1978.
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